AAAA I LOVE ALL OF YOUR PROJECTS!! all of the storylines is really amazing~ especially this one i really like Niel's design and really curious about the story behind him. i also made some quick sketches of him in the cafe, i hope you will continue the project in the future but do please take care of yourself and remember to rest ^^
I really enjoyed this demo and would definitely recommend checking it out. Genuinely disturbing at times. Great story, beautiful art. I'm really looking forward to the full release. Thank you to the creator for an entertaining time 😊
i really enjoyed this demo!! won't get too spoiler-y but parts of it genuinely creeped me out ;-; .. i saw you said you had dyslexia and that's the reason for the spelling mistakes, but don't worry, i could still understand what you meant while reading!! plus, you could easily get a friend or someone online to volunteer to spell-check for you for free!! anyways, i really look forward to seeing more of this game but i sincerely hope it isn't the cliched "turns out it was all the MC's mental illness" trope xD ..
It's really hard to write with my dyslexia and sometimes the comments make me think it's unreadable so I'm glad it's somewhat understandable :b. The volunteer proof reader is a good idea, but I'd feel really bad if since I can't pay them :,). And thank you so much for enjoying my game! More creepy bits to come! (Also I have a strong dislike to the 'it was all because of the MC's mental illness trope' so don't worry ;b)
it's reassuring to hear that someone else dislikes that trope xD and don't worry, the text was fully readable and understandable to me, and didn't hinder my enjoyment at all!! i really enjoyed this demo :D!! plus, lots of people really wouldn't mind volunteering, but if you really feel guilty then maybe you can offer beta testing so they're technically getting something out of it (except it's early access to content instead of payment)?? just an idea!!
the game is really fun and good so far, but since the text is in similar colors to its' background its kinda hard to read, other thank that and spelling errors its a good game!
this is really good so far! i really like the artwork, its super cute! i do hope that in later versions the ui might be updated though, the font is super small for the buttons on the bottom of the text boxes, and speaking of them, the text boxes also look a little lacking in my opinion. there are also a good amount of spelling errors that need to be fixed, and maybe having volunteer proofreaders or beta testers could help with that. i do like whats here so far though like i said! nial is really cute and i would love to see more of him! <3
Thank you so much for the feedback! Unfortunately I have no money to pay proof readers or beta testers ;-;. I've tried to learn a little more about gui, and stuff, so hopefully it's up to standard when I update it lol :,)
sorry for the late response! but, as someone else offered, there are probably people willing to do proofreading or beta testing for you for free, if you set up a discord server for your game development there would probably be people willing to do so in there! but i also understand if you dont want to have people do that sort of work for free, as it is still legitimate work.
OMG the demo is amazing i really wish that there's more TvT. But i can wait it doesn't matter how long TvT. But yeah Nial is scary but he is so cute ackkkk---
This demo blew me out of the water. It was way more creepy than I was expecting, and I love it even more for it, can't wait to see how it moves forward!
really hoping the spelling and punctuation are improved in the full release; youre really selling yourself short with this demo and itd be a shame for such a fun concept to be dragged down by having it be difficult and unpleasant to read.
also maybe dont use slurs? even if you horribly misspell it, sp*z is still not okay to say in any form
I’m so sorry about that, I honestly thought that word meant twitching I’ll take it out immediately thank you for telling me, and sorry about the spelling my dyslexia makes it harder for me to spell check myself.
I wonder if you use a personal social media site to update about this game,because I will love to post fanart or something like that so more people know about this game with hashtag for easy searching
This is the best romance game I have ever played! This is exacly what I was looking for, love sick romance with a hint of angst. This is better then.. your boyfriend peter
It's taking so much longer than expected, I have the demo done and I was going to upload it, but then at the last minuet decided to change Nial's sprites because they looked awful lol. The demo should be up soon though!
Thank you for your support, I never thought someone would actively keep up with the progress of my game, so it makes me really happy :,)
This is amazing game, question when is the full version coming out? I'm actually invested in this, not totally because i'm single lol (all jokes aside its an actually genuine question)
i just saw the second part of it, and gonna play now after this text, any who i can't wait for the full version, take as much as time and break (for your school and yourself) as you need, i'll try to keep a reminder to look at your page half a week or so. Also i hope your taking care of yourself, as much as this game is fun, i want your mental being/ health is first.
Ooooooh! A new one! Hoho I enjoyed playing this one. I am into yandere soooo additional 10000% more xD I cant wait to see the full version (☆▽☆) hey, congratulations for making your first game ( ╹▽╹ ) it was a good start
Just played and it was a good start! i miss these types of love obsessed yandere type vns, honesty i think it would be super cool to have a full cast of yandere guys competing for mc's hand lol but overall its a short and sweet demo with bopping music
ps i loved the sounds that the main menu options made, that was a good touch!! :)))))))))))
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This was way creepier than I thought it would be, haha. Good luck on whatever you do next!
I hope you continue this, it was really good! <3
well yeah this is awesome major ddlc vibes love our yandere ai
I'm I the only one who can't play:((((
wahhhhh this is so cuteeeeeeeee!!! I hope it gets continued because Nial is just so...🥺
ok but this game is so creepy though BUT I STILL LOVE IT
UGHHH i cant believe this is only the demooo i love this so much :<
Quick question. Is the player only able play as a girl in this game? Is the MC gender-neutral? or can the player choose there gender?
This game uses gender neutral pronouns for the player :)
AAAA I LOVE ALL OF YOUR PROJECTS!! all of the storylines is really amazing~ especially this one i really like Niel's design and really curious about the story behind him. i also made some quick sketches of him in the cafe, i hope you will continue the project in the future but do please take care of yourself and remember to rest ^^
OMG THANK YOU your art is amazing (;´༎ຶД༎ຶ`) <3<3<3 I’m really happy you like my games!
THIS GAME GOT SCARIER WHAT THE FUCKKKKK
HELP IM SHITTING MYSELFFFF
i love this game sm aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
I really hope you finish this game! I love it!
I love the creepiness, the conflict, all is amazing! I hope you decide to continue this game :)
Yes.
(P.s: I'm working on my own visual novel and it was inspired by this but not the exact same thing just some of the things are similar!"
I really enjoyed this demo and would definitely recommend checking it out. Genuinely disturbing at times. Great story, beautiful art. I'm really looking forward to the full release. Thank you to the creator for an entertaining time 😊
Omg thank you for playing my game! This version is extremely unfinished so sorry for any errors 🥲
Please don't be so hard on yourself, you have done an amazing job and should be proud of yourself ☺️
IKLOOOOOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
NOT the cliffhanger TT I can't wait for more. I hope everyone was able to put two and two together near the end. I really enjoyed it overall.
i really enjoyed this demo!! won't get too spoiler-y but parts of it genuinely creeped me out ;-; .. i saw you said you had dyslexia and that's the reason for the spelling mistakes, but don't worry, i could still understand what you meant while reading!! plus, you could easily get a friend or someone online to volunteer to spell-check for you for free!! anyways, i really look forward to seeing more of this game but i sincerely hope it isn't the cliched "turns out it was all the MC's mental illness" trope xD ..
It's really hard to write with my dyslexia and sometimes the comments make me think it's unreadable so I'm glad it's somewhat understandable :b. The volunteer proof reader is a good idea, but I'd feel really bad if since I can't pay them :,). And thank you so much for enjoying my game! More creepy bits to come! (Also I have a strong dislike to the 'it was all because of the MC's mental illness trope' so don't worry ;b)
it's reassuring to hear that someone else dislikes that trope xD and don't worry, the text was fully readable and understandable to me, and didn't hinder my enjoyment at all!! i really enjoyed this demo :D!! plus, lots of people really wouldn't mind volunteering, but if you really feel guilty then maybe you can offer beta testing so they're technically getting something out of it (except it's early access to content instead of payment)?? just an idea!!
That's a really good idea! I'm not sure who would be willing to be a beta tester, but I'll ask around! Thank you
the game is really fun and good so far, but since the text is in similar colors to its' background its kinda hard to read, other thank that and spelling errors its a good game!
Thank you! I'll change the colors so it's easier to read :)
this is really good so far! i really like the artwork, its super cute! i do hope that in later versions the ui might be updated though, the font is super small for the buttons on the bottom of the text boxes, and speaking of them, the text boxes also look a little lacking in my opinion. there are also a good amount of spelling errors that need to be fixed, and maybe having volunteer proofreaders or beta testers could help with that. i do like whats here so far though like i said! nial is really cute and i would love to see more of him! <3
Thank you so much for the feedback! Unfortunately I have no money to pay proof readers or beta testers ;-;. I've tried to learn a little more about gui, and stuff, so hopefully it's up to standard when I update it lol :,)
hey if you want could do it for free
sorry for the late response! but, as someone else offered, there are probably people willing to do proofreading or beta testing for you for free, if you set up a discord server for your game development there would probably be people willing to do so in there! but i also understand if you dont want to have people do that sort of work for free, as it is still legitimate work.
This is amazing!! I love this demo so much! Nial is such an interesting character and I'm very curious to see how the story progresses!!
thank you (;´༎ຶv༎ຶ`)
OMG the demo is amazing i really wish that there's more TvT. But i can wait it doesn't matter how long TvT. But yeah Nial is scary but he is so cute ackkkk---
Thank you so much (TuT), there's going to be an update soon. Thank you again for your support! <3
OMG I'll be waiting on your update once again I love it very much ♥️♥️
this demo was amazing! I would love to see more of it so I'll just wait 'till it gets released :3333
thank you! <3
This demo blew me out of the water. It was way more creepy than I was expecting, and I love it even more for it, can't wait to see how it moves forward!
thank you! I was trying to make it sort of unsettling so it’s awesome to hear that someone found it creepy :)
really hoping the spelling and punctuation are improved in the full release; youre really selling yourself short with this demo and itd be a shame for such a fun concept to be dragged down by having it be difficult and unpleasant to read.
also maybe dont use slurs? even if you horribly misspell it, sp*z is still not okay to say in any form
I’m so sorry about that, I honestly thought that word meant twitching I’ll take it out immediately thank you for telling me, and sorry about the spelling my dyslexia makes it harder for me to spell check myself.
Um I checked back at my script, I spelled it wrong, but I don’t think I wrote the word your thinking of. But I did spell horrendously wrong though
i got too freaked out when that face popped up that i couldnt continue, haha. still a great game tho!
lol thank you! <3
I use Twitter (@JJDuck7), thank you for taking an interest in my game! :b
i can't wait for more the endings i got were so addicting and i love it so much i can't wait for the full game/demo but no rush take your time :)
Thank you! I'm really glad you like it! <3
loved it! cant wait for more
<3 thank you
Alfin , I get such good recommendations saljlaskd <three
<3 <3
This is the best romance game I have ever played! This is exacly what I was looking for, love sick romance with a hint of angst. This is better then.. your boyfriend peter
Thank you! I too love twisted angsty romances :b
Despite the typos, this was a very cute and enjoyable game! Can't wait for the horror elements to fully kick in in the full release!
thank you! I’ll get rid of the typos in the full release (I’ll try to get rid of most of them right now though)! :b
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!! :b
It's taking so much longer than expected, I have the demo done and I was going to upload it, but then at the last minuet decided to change Nial's sprites because they looked awful lol. The demo should be up soon though!
Thank you for your support, I never thought someone would actively keep up with the progress of my game, so it makes me really happy :,)
This is amazing game, question when is the full version coming out? I'm actually invested in this, not totally because i'm single lol (all jokes aside its an actually genuine question)
Most likely the end of march, depending on how much school work I have. But the full demo will be released soon <3
i just saw the second part of it, and gonna play now after this text, any who i can't wait for the full version, take as much as time and break (for your school and yourself) as you need, i'll try to keep a reminder to look at your page half a week or so. Also i hope your taking care of yourself, as much as this game is fun, i want your mental being/ health is first.
SHUT UP THIS WAS SO COOL IM GONNA CRY OAAMMAMAMAMAMAMAMMAMAMA TYSM FOR MAKING THIS GAME!!
THANK YOU FOR PLAYING YOURE SO SWEET 😭💕♥️♥️♥️
OMG THEY CALLED ME SWEET NOOO U THANKK UUN<333 PLEASE ALWAYS STAY SAFE AND TAKE CARE!!
IT WAS SO CUTE??? it was really fun! can't wait untile the full version!! <3
thank you (⁎⁍̴̛ᴗ⁍̴̛⁎) I’ll work hard so the full version will be here soon!
Cute game, hope you continue it!!
I WOONDER how long the likability will stay up if you take the right paths haha
Thank you! Likability is hard to keep up when you don’t see a meter :b
Ooooooh! A new one! Hoho I enjoyed playing this one. I am into yandere soooo additional 10000% more xD I cant wait to see the full version (☆▽☆) hey, congratulations for making your first game ( ╹▽╹ ) it was a good start
Thank you so much! <3
Just played and it was a good start! i miss these types of love obsessed yandere type vns, honesty i think it would be super cool to have a full cast of yandere guys competing for mc's hand lol but overall its a short and sweet demo with bopping music
ps i loved the sounds that the main menu options made, that was a good touch!! :)))))))))))
Thank you! :b
I can't wait for the terror to begin!
I did not expect for someone to play my game on YouTube, thank you so much! (Sorry for the spelling and punctuation errors)